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I am Arushi. Being a teen I really like to do lots of things.. And writing stories is one of them. :)
Hope you like it! this is my first story on this blog and any suggestions for improving the stories are welcome! :)
I am Arushi. Being a teen I really like to do lots of things.. And writing stories is one of them. :)
Hope you like it! this is my first story on this blog and any suggestions for improving the stories are welcome! :)
GOD’S WAY
It took place
long long long ago, million years before the Christ was born….when science had
developed so much that people forgot god…
A teenager’s group, Alexia, Ruby and Olive,
were returning from school. They had had their Annual Science Fete, that day,
and were exhausted. They started discussing the Fate and the topic diverted to
science. Ruby exclaimed, “Hey guys! I heard that some scientist has answered
why the flag waves at moon, where there is no air!” “Yes,” replied Olive, “and
a team of fifteen men have just come back after staying on Mars for 3 months.
They have told us all about its climate and physical features.”
Alexia was astonished, “I say, science has answered many of those difficult,
almost impossible, questions and have done various unbelievable things. By the
way, Who is God? Grandma told me that he was a deity to be worshiped or
something. But I don’t know for sure. ” Her friends looked blank and shook
their heads. Then they continued chattering on different topics.
From heaven, God-king Indra happened to
stumble on this conversation. He was watching the earth on his Everywhere
Monitoring Screen (heaven had also quite advanced) and by chance heard this
gossip. He was frustrated; it was not the first time this was happening. The new
generation of that century hardly seemed to know him, let alone visiting
temples and worship halls. Everyone was busy in their own lifestyles and
duties. Before people at least knew him and asked help and prayed in
difficulties but this age, the gadget age, seemed to do something else. They
were only developing in science. He was also worried that so much development
could result in manufacture of strong weapons and nuclear power plants. This
was a serious threat and could start of world war III. He believed it was his
duty to get something done about it. So, King Indra decided to call a meeting
of celestial beings to discuss the happenings on earth.
In the
meeting room, all gods, angels and fairies assembled, as decided. King Indra
was at the head of the table. He told them of his concerns. He concluded his
speech by “I am not annoyed because they have forgotten and stopped honoring us
but because they are getting too big for their boots. They ought to be taught a
lesson so that they recall who the supreme power is.” All gods nodded in
agreement, except one, Varsha. She was just a novice, not experienced like the
others.
Everyone
looked up, surprised.
Brahma asked her, “Don’t you agree, Varsha?”
Varsha nodded
and said “I know that it seems right to teach humans a lesson but I don’t want
to be harsh. So I can’t agree till I hear your ideas. What are they?”
Vishnu, who
was deep in thought, suggested “What about causing a climatic disaster like
earthquake or flood. We can then destroy all or a part of those new technologies”.
Some gods were impressed, but King Indra said
“this is not a good idea according to me. It doesn’t seem like a solution. They
must feel in their hearts what they are doing is wrong.”
“What about saying we are displeased or
something like that through sky, Aakashvani, you know” said Brahma, chief angel
importantly.
Most gods
looked at him mockingly. “What? They would think they have only imagined it or
its some kind of demonstration of a new type of technology.” Brahma’s idea was
[roved worthless.
Some more idiotic ideas were discussed like
removing human brain or transferring to past. They were mostly all useless, but
some were quite intelligent. It looked as if everyone was full of ideas which
were streaming out. The gods and fairies were confused.
Varsha listened to all this attentively but
silently. At last she said “Well, I think that if we, one of us, go down to
earth finalize the conditions before implementing such a harsh plan. We may be
mistaken and there may still be a number of people believing in us if not
majority.”
This sounded so sensible that it gained
immediate approval of all. So the first step to be taken was to go to earth and
monitor the conditions of two-legged people. There was a vote and it was
decided that Varsha, who was known for her good nature and sense of justice,
was sent to do the task.
Varsha was to
be transported to earth first, and search for a suitable disguise. She was supposed
to use her supernatural powers only to be connected with heaven.
Varsha was
scared that gods may destroy earth.
She thought. "The condition of humans was not very
appealing. If their state was too bad then anything could be done to earth and
she would be helpless. Already there were some very harsh suggestions which
could be implemented easily. She had only postponed this for a short while."
She went to
earth and decided to dress up as a teenager. A teenager was very observant and
curious and she could easily ask questions without raising suspicion. She had
changed her appearance well.
She concluded
to be friends with children of her age, teenage, and ask them about science,
believe in gods, angels etc to monitor that generation before their parents and
grand parents. So she befriended and gained trust of Flora, Jake and Jane, kids
of the house next door. Varsha had even taken up the name of Lucy to sound
English.
She called at
their house to ask for a drink of water and they fell in conversation. She had
thought that she would not ask questions she wanted to ask for a few days. She
took them in her trust. They called her every day to play, talk or help in
projects. They became inseparable. Lucy had told them that her age was fourteen
and it turned out that Flora and Jake, who were twins, were also fourteen and
Jane, the baby sister, was ten.
Lucy, as we
must call her now, was to report to heaven each night. She gave them this news
and they were satisfied. They told Varsha to continue trying to gain the kids
trust.
Varsha (Lucy)
had now known Flora and rest for over a month. She concluded that this was the
time for inspection. She told them to accompany her on a picnic to Blueberry
Hills. They took a large quantity of food with them, cakes, sandwiches,
biscuits and chocolates.
They reached
Blueberry Hills after two hour bike ride and they were exhausted. They stopped
under the shade of an oak tree and munched their meal.
Lucy started the topic of gods. She enquired,
“Do you know somebody called god, I read about him in the library”.
Jake and Jane shook their heads but Flora
spoke up. “Isn’t he the supernatural power which people believed earlier?”
“Oh! You mean
that, but let’s change the topic of talk.” said Jane in her low voice.
Varsha was
shocked. She had not expected this. She asked “All your friends don’t believe
in gods?”
“No, they
don’t. Do you?” answered Jake.
Varsha went blank for a moment. Then she
calmly stated “What do you think created you?”
“I don’t
actually know, but science has explained this. We have it in our course this
year.”Replied Flora thoughtfully. And then she added, “Science has made us
powerful and above all living things.”
“But are not
the animals powerful” inquired Varsha, amazed.
Jake looked at her mockingly, “Of course not,
they are just brain-less, hand-less creatures meant to help us.”
Jane also
joined in,” Yes, I agree. It’s true that they are living but, I am sorry, not
powerful.”
Varsha had now analyzed the problems of
mankind. They were very proud and in a dream of being the greatest. They had
neglected the other co- existing beings. She wanted to report this incident and
air her ideas to heaven and this could only be done after getting rid of these
children, even if they were friends. So she put up an act of having a stomach
ache and said,” I am not feeling well. Result of extra ice-creams I guess.
Anyway I think that I will feel better after a rest and so see I am going home
but you continue your day out. I couldn’t bear that you miss your day out
because of me.” saying this she rushed down the hill shouting hurried Byes.
She had brainwave.
She was eager to report all this to her headquarters, heaven. As she reached an
isolated place, she disappeared. She intended to break out this news to
everybody as fast as possible. She reached heaven in a jiffy and called a
meeting.
When
everybody came, she described the incident . After that she said “Why not give
some brains as that of humans to apes and other animals along with basic magic.
Then humans will have competition and that would make them stay in place and we
are not even hurting them. We are just giving some extra brains to deserved
creatures. This will land people in problems and they will know who the Supreme
is.” Everyone loved this idea, but Eliza, a fairy, pointed out a flaw. “But
still the four legged creatures don’t have hands.” “Good point, but we can
develop their fore limbs into hands” called Brahma, a chief angel.
So Varsha
again sent to earth, this time with her wand and powers. She was to do magic
and make changes in the animals. She reached her destination and..
SHOW US YOUR
POWERS, OH WAND,
AND CHANGE
THE FOUR LEGGED CREATURES OF THIS LAND
INTO HUMANS
WITH BRAINS AND HANDS.
BOOM! Lo
behold, every creature with four legs may it be a mole or a giraffe had two
hands and brains. The magic had turned them into fast thinking animals and were
given the boon of not being proud. They were given a sort of fast forward and
everything became very developed quickly. By the end of the decade, they were
as advanced as humans, even more. Giraffe had invented telescopes and space
ships which explored Uranus, let alone Mars. Rabbits and hares had made a tablet
which could change our size. Tigers had adopted a way to change the taste of
food they eat and lions had discovered a way by which they could go to any
place any time. They were all far more advanced than humans.
Varsha
laughed by seeing all this, specially the plight of humans. They were all
astonished and their pride had fallen on earth. Their discoveries were nothing
compared to the previous brainless creatures. They were very surprised and had
not expected this.
This
continued for a long time and animals discovered new things but were not proud.
Humans racked their brains about what had made the animals so developed
suddenly, but it was not until fifty years that a smart boy hit the right idea,
“I think the Supreme belief, god, was true and he is angry with us for being
proud and merciless. And out of anger has done this. So we should go and
apologize to him, by praying”. This was broadcasted and people began to think
about it and majority believed it was true. Then they prayed to the Almighty
and it was only after many humble apologies, prayers and vows that King Indra
was convinced they were sorry. After consulting his jury, he took away the
brains of animals and advised humans that if they again became proud, they
would not be forgiven.
After that humans
never became proud but used their brains for a good cause, but always
remembered who the supreme was. All their discoveries were banned from use and
they intended to have a fresh and better beginning again.
And this story was told to children worldwide
to teach them never to be proud, by the name GOD’S WAY.
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